Tuesday, July 11, 2017

Early Writing Tag




Hello all!

We all have those "stories" that we wrote as kids, whether we wrote them in the solitude of our rooms or with a group of friends. Some make us laugh and some make us cringe and wish they had stayed in our brains. But it's still fun to look over them again, isn't it?

Pip @ Pip and Lolly tagged me a while back for this really fun tag. I've been working on it in bits and pieces in between Life and Camp NaNoWriMo.

Here are the rules of the tag:

1. Thank the person that tagged you (Thank you Pip!!!).
2. Answer these two questions: what horrendous book(s) did you write as a child? What did you learn from it? The amount of "books" is up to your discretion!
3. Tag 5 other bloggers.

On to the questions!


1. Baby story. 

This one was probably the first story that I ever wrote. The ones before were oral stories or fake diaries.

I had a title, cover and everything. Do I remember said title? Nope.
And the "book" is probably buried somewhere in a box. Where it belongs.

Anyways, it was book telling about how I and my Girl Scout friends found a baby girl (I think I named her Liza) in our cabin at this camp and proceeded to somehow take care of her. I remember there being a football player involved, but I don't remember why (boyfriend idea??? I had to be about 12 when I wrote this....). The biggest thing that I remember is that I used a pager (yeah, tells you how old I am, doesn't it) to find out what the baby's name was and how old she was. I had to have thought that a pager was a secret knowledge decoder or something....

What I learned:

For pity sakes, look up what the heck the device is and what it's used for before putting it into your story!


2. A Heart of Gold

So...my best friend in middle school/early high school started writing a story called Double Helix. It was a contemporary story but she never got further than the first couple of chapters. I was the alpha reader for it while she was writing it, and it inspired me to write my own contemporary story - one a little different from hers.

It basically followed the story of a girl in French American family (the characters of which were originally stolen from a French immersion course I was taking) that adopted a golden retriever and some of the shenanigans that followed.

I will say that being an alpha reader and writing at the same time was extremely detrimental to the quality of my writing. I made the mistake of plagarizing my friend's manuscript (thinking that it was a good joke/imitation is the sincerest form of flattery). Needless to say, she was not happy with me.

Even though I actually never finished the story, I did attempt a re-write.

Here is the outline/synopsis of that re-write:
Celine Taylor is forced to photograph some animals from the animal shelter for an awareness fair sponsored by her school. Celine is afraid of dogs and doesn’t like going near them. But a Golden Retriever puppy at the animal shelter captures Celine’s heart. While the puppy’s ownership is being questioned, Rae the puppy leads Celine some wild adventures, including looking for a job, finding Celine’s missing boyfriend, and capturing a band of kidnappers.

Now as I look at the story again, there are still some good parts. It's definitely a clichish high school write still, but....


What I learned:

Never directly steal stuff from a work in progress or from anything else, for that matter.

Never copy off your writer BFF.

Never agree to be an alpha reader to an incomplete draft while working on of your own in the same genre.

If it needs a re-write, don't hesitate. Just do it. But save the previous drafts, so you can see your progression.


3. Diary Buck

This one was written in my early teens, but honestly, I still hadn't learned anything about being realistic yet.

I was inspired to start writing this one after going to a parade with my best friend, her brother and some of his friends. Some of the shenanigans of what happened afterwards, as well as stuff that happened to me in real life in the following months wound up in my story, but a lot of it was still a product of my imagination.

Basically, it was a take on the Swiss Family Robinson and Gilligan's Island (except at the time, I hadn't heard of Gilligan's Island). It was me, my best friend and two of the guy friends I mentioned, (one guy was actually written out and replaced with another guy later on in order to fit the circumstances of the time). We went hiking, supposedly for an afternoon, proceeded to get lost, and we had to survive somehow.
I had the craziest stuff lurking in everyone's backpacks. How-to books (I mean everything from farming to foraging, guys), cooking utensils, paper products, and then some. I also remember that we found all sorts of stray animals (dairy cow was the one I remember the most) as well as all sorts of abandoned houses and fields that we "gathered" from. We apparently were able to hunt deer and fish from the first couple of days, though I don't remember there being any guns or bows being carried. Apparently we were rescued over a year later by rangers who came upon us accidentally, and we had a double wedding afterwards with plans to go back to the site during the summers.

Yeah.

This was another one that I started editing before I finished it. It still exists in a notebook. Once in a while when my fingers itch to type, I pull it out and start transcribing it into a Word document (the pencil is fading and I want to save it).

What I learned:

Using reality as a base for a story really works!

Pencil doesn't last very well in notebooks. Computer is definitely better for keeping stuff.

4. My Carla Rosa series

This series of short stories was the perfect bridge from my immature high school writing into my current style of writing. A knock-off of Nancy Drew, this series featured an 18 year old detective/informant girl working with the Santa Barbara police force in the drugs department. In the series, there was a subplot featuring a romance between her and a police sergeant she worked a lot with, right on up to their marriage and birth of their first child. They were created in my high school creative writing class.

I loved the first story of this series so much that I used an edited version of it as my first "story" of my college creative writing class. My second favorite was the third one, with the second one being the really hated one of the bunch.

What I learned:

It was during the college class peer editing of the first CR story that I finally discovered one of my biggest faults in writing - my imagination was bending reality too far. I was unrealistic. The story wasn't believable. People are also apparently turned off by unrealistic stories.

That changed my writing forever. Since then, research has been an integral part of my writing. Whether it's studying the original instance or inspiration, or real places and events. And honestly, while my muse may still like to roam wild, I look back at my old style of writing and grimace a bit. I'll leave the unrealistic stuff to my daydreams.

That's it! 

Now....I'm bending the rules again.

It says in the rules that I need to tag 5 bloggers. Honestly, the bloggers that I want to give it to either have been given 30 other tags to do or are really busy with Camp NaNo.

So...the first five bloggers that comment on this post, consider yourselves tagged.

Scribblingly yours,

Catherine

P.S. For making it through this post, I'll give you another snippet of "The Apple in the Snow". Bonus points if you remember where this line came from!!!




26 comments:

  1. I suppose I am now officially tagged, huh? XD Okay cool! It might take me awhile to get to it, but I'll put it on my list. :)
    These were lots of fun to read through! I definitely was very unrealistic in my own early writing, and though I'm not passionate about researching, I now do a lot prior to the first draft. It saves me lots of time in editing!
    (That quote made me smile by the way! I love it. ) XD Great post!

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    1. In a word, yes. XD Can't wait to read it! Glad you enjoyed the post and the quote!

      Catherine

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  2. I started skimming (eyes were starting to bother me and I was determined to finish reading) and then I saw something about a double wedding and retraced my steps back to make sure I read that right. Interesting concept, Lol.

    Ah, the times when we wrote and thought we did great. I remember three childhood friends (when we were young. We aren't friends now) decided we were going to start a band despite lack of musical talent. Yep.

    We set up stage names using our first initials of our real names and I started to write the songs, which weren't great, but they weren't the worst things ever. Funny to look back on old writings.

    I guess now I'm tagged. I'll get to work on this. I was trying to figure out my posts for next week, besides one about a dog we found on the Forth of July.

    Anyway, fun post to read. Have fun with that double wedding and congratulations. ;)

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    1. Hahahahahahaha, like that will happen anytime soon. If you look at stories with two romantic lines, that's actually pretty cliche to have a double wedding.

      BTW - you're tagged :)

      Catherine

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    2. I haven't read stories with two romantic lines. I bet it is pretty common, though.

      I don't get many tags, so this is fun. But I warn you, this will be an interesting post. I didn't write much when I was younger. I hated writing growing up. Now its like breathing. So weird how God looks at us, laughs, and said, "Haha, you think you know, but you don't."
      :)

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    3. Heehee, yes. That is very true.

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  3. Me: This is such a good post, I'll comment as soon as I finish reading!

    Catherine:So...the first five bloggers that comment on this post, consider yourselves tagged.

    Me:.... *scrolls down to comments, and sees only two other bloggers have commented so far* I guess I'll put this on my list of "tags to do"!

    I loved reading about your first stories, I also have a few awful ones!!! XD


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    1. *laughs* I felt bad for giving you (and others) so many tags, so I left it to chance.

      Can't wait to read your post!!

      Catherine

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  4. You did the tag! I'm so glad and loved reading about your stories. Yeah, I've learned the hard way not to let my imagination get the better of me.

    ~ Pip

    P.S. I don't want to be tagged again-LOL.

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    1. Yes, I did! Don't worry, your comment won't count (no tag-back rule). Glad you liked it!

      Catherine

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  5. I'll do this tag! So cringeworthy to look back on what we used to think was genius, but... still marvelous fun. Your stories sound... funny and yet awesome at the same time. Beautiful. XD

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    1. Aw, thanks Faith!! Can't wait to see your post!

      Catherine

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  6. Hahahaa that was five! I'm safe! Not that I wouldn't like to do a tag, its just with Camp NaNo and the fifty billion other tags, you've given me, I decided to pass on this one.

    -Lia
    catholicgirlstuff.blogspot.com
    lilahsmusicals.blogspot.com

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    1. No, you're not. You are now officially the #5 blogger to be tagged. Pip's doesn't count, no tag backs! Sorry, sis! *evil laugh*

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  7. DANG IT! I THOUGHT I WAS SAFE! SO CRUEL CATHERINE!!!

    -Lia

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    1. Well I'll put it on the list, big sis!

      *shakes head in disbelief at myself*

      -Lia

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    2. Wait, are you related or do you call each other sis? Sorry if this is a stupid question. :)

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    3. It's not a stupid question, Ivie! Lia is and isn't my sister :) It is rather complicated, and it would take an entire post to explain it all.

      Catherine

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    4. Oh, okay. I worried I was being stupid, but there were these two girls I had talked to on Go Teen Writers without realizing until a while ago that not only were they sisters, but they were twins. I had talked to each of them before and didn't know, lol. That's why I asked. :)

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  8. You ARE a writer Catherine! These works sound good to me!

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  9. This is awesome, you definitely were a better writer than me XD I cringe to remember the stories I wrote, however few they were. As far as the bending reality goes...that's ME, and I still seem to struggle with it, haha...it's just so tempting to bend reality isn't it?

    Great post and I might include some this tag in a mashup post because tags are great but mine are PILING UP.

    Anna - www.worldthroughherheart.blogspot.com

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    1. Yes, reality's rules tend to rather....terrible sometimes. That's totally fine, even though you're safe from being tagged (by me, anyway).

      Catherine
      catherinesrebellingmuse.blogspot.com

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  10. Awesome blog!

    I would sincerely appreciate it if you checked out my book reviews blog at https://elsbookreviews.blogspot.ca/ and possibly give it a follow as well! Excited to read more of your posts!

    - El

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    1. Thank you El! I have checked out your blog, I don't recognize a lot of the titles that you have. Do you review YA Lit?

      Catherine

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